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spider tangled up in your own web of lies
the flies swarm to taunt you-
master of your own demise.
fool in the darkness of your seething belly,
put on that false, crooked smile now,
let the fraying strings lick you on the wind.
cry your hissing laughter-
a mockery of true joy;
dew drops mingle with spit as you splutter curses of hatred.
caged in your own torture device-
and there are holes in your bones.
the icy wind sings through them as the flies' swarm grows larger.
to the west the sun rises on this day of irony
and as a gray dawn envelopes the world,
the eastern moon is blue.
©2008-2009 ~christania7
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wow, i am always in awe of your work. its incredible. Just truly remarkable. great job as always

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Everyone feels a certain way for a reason, when you read a person’s poem you’re glimpsing at their very soul
and your comments always induce blushing, lol. thank you. :glomp:

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"From my rotting body, flowers shall grow and I am in them and that is eternity."
lol anytime ^-^

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Everyone feels a certain way for a reason, when you read a person’s poem you’re glimpsing at their very soul
i love spider poems! ^^ i tried doing something similar some time back but you poem is just mind-blowing. i like how it flows effortlessly from one image to the next. :)

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:jedi: Dont Worry...Sith Happens :jedi:

The Poetry.. That comes from the squaring off between.. And the circling is worth it.. Finding beauty in the dissonance.. -Tool
What a phenomenal imagery of small world's creatures, I got a perfect vision while i'm reading. The end goes warmly simple, yet beautiful.
I like it so...

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"I'm just worn out with dreams"

"Though lovers be lost love shall not; And death shall have no dominion"
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